I love, love, love this. I have been there.

You have a wonderful way with imagery and plot build-up ( which is a made up term because I can’t think of the correct, existing term.)

I was really hoping for a different outcome, but when you fell asleep kissing, I think I knew.

That was just too sad for a first kissing session. ☹

Imagine where you’d be at 60.

I still don’t know what I want to be when I grow up, but I know I want it to be spelled right and punctuated correctly. I guess that’s something.